各位英语界的朋友快过来看看吧!帮我看看这篇文章有没有错漏的地方!同祝福你们中秋节快乐!TheMid-AutumnfestivalLadiesandGentlemen,GoodmorningI’mverygladtostandhereandgiveyouashortspeech.Iamvery

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各位英语界的朋友快过来看看吧!帮我看看这篇文章有没有错漏的地方!同祝福你们中秋节快乐!
The Mid-Autumn festival
Ladies and Gentlemen ,Good morning I’m very glad to stand here and give you a short speech .I am very lucky I should deserve a big round of applause .
Today ,we are talking about "Mid-Autumn festival" We should discuss a few questions .
First ,do you heard of the "Mid-Autumn festival" Do you know the source of the Mid-Autumn festival (.) The Mid-Autumn festival has a long history
Second ,do you know The Mid-Autumn festival custom (.)Generally speaking ,the Mid-Autumn festival custom is to eat moon cakes Who would like to eat moon cakes I have a moon cake Give you
Third ,Who knows now and past the Mid-Autumn festival ,is there any difference (.)Yes ,it introducing the western culture
Fourth ,how do you spend The Mid-Autumn festival (.) yes ,People like gather to have a big family meal
Fifth ,do you know about "the Mid-Autumn festival" of beautiful sentence (.)May we all be blessed with longevity Though far apart ,we are still able to share the beauty of the moon together If they were liked "the Mid-Autumn festival" of beautiful sentence ,you could surf the Net
Finally ,What are your thoughts on the Mid-Autumn festival (.)The Mid-Autumn festival could make us happiness!
OK So much for that That all!Thank you
中秋节 女士们,先生们,早上好!我很高兴地站在这里,给你一个简短的演讲。我很幸运!我应该配个热烈的掌声。今天,我们讨论关于“中秋”!我们应该讨论一下几个问题。首先,你听说过“中秋”吗?你知道中秋节的来源吗?(......)中秋节有着悠久的历史。第二,你知道中秋节习惯呢?(......)一般来说,中秋节的习俗是吃月饼!谁会喜欢吃月饼吗?我有一个月饼!给你!第三,谁知道现在和过去的中秋节,这有什么区别吗?(......)是的,它引入了西方文化!第四,你怎样度过中秋节吗?(......)是的,人们喜欢收集有一个大的家庭餐!第五,你知道“中秋”漂亮的句子吗?(......)“但愿你长久，千里共婵娟”!如果你们喜欢“中秋”漂亮的句子,你可以上网!最后,你有什么想法在中秋节吗?(......)中秋节可以使我们幸福!好了！到此为止！结束了!

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I'm very happy to be (Stand) here
Why do you think you deserve a big round of applause 什么的没开始说就要人拍手?
Today,I am talking about .I like to discuss a few .只有你在演讲,不是 we
First have you heard of Mid-Autumn festival
Who would like to try a moon cake.Here I have one for you.
culture -- 那个是now,那个是past,如果交代一下比较有意思
Families like to get togather to have a big meal.(一家人聚一起吃大餐）
第fifth 翻得太不通,无从改起
Good Luck with your 文章,May I know how old or which grade you are?