关于英语作文本人对英语作文有些不熟练,在此写两篇英语作文,望请各位大师帮我看看有没有问题.ThisSeptember,IwillgoingtogotoQingdaoNo.22middleschool.QingdaoNo.22middleschoolisinSilioubeiroad.I‘mre

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关于英语作文
本人对英语作文有些不熟练,在此写两篇英语作文,望请各位大师帮我看看有没有问题.
This September,I will going to go to Qingdao No.22 middle school.Qingdao No.22 middle school is in Silioubeiroad.I‘m really excited.Because I can make new friends.I love No.22 middle school.
This September,I will go to Dalian.I will go to Dalian by bus.This September,I will go to the zoo.And I will go to the beach.I will very happy.

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This September,I will go to Qingdao No.22 middle school.The school is in Silioubei road.I'm really excited.Because I can make new friends.I love No.22 middle school.
This September,I will go to Dalian.I will go there by bus.This September,I will go to the zoo and the beach.I will be very happy.
(作文已经修改如上,原文错误有：will 和be going to一起用,Qingdao No.22 middle改成The,避免重复,xx road中间要空格,第二个Dalian改成there,避免重复,I will go to the zoo.And I will go to the beach.合并成一句,等)