·大家帮我看一下暑假英语日记是否有语病MondayAugust14thsunnyTodaytheweatherwasnotveryhot,soIwenttomovieswhitmycouson.Hewasveryfunnyandinteresting.Guess,whatfilmwewatched.Oh,itwas“harrypotterandtheorde

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·大家帮我看一下暑假英语日记是否有语病
Monday August 14th sunny
Today the weather was not very hot,so I went to movies whit my couson.He was very funny and interesting.Guess,what film we watched.Oh,it was “harry potter and the order of the phoenix.”
I don’t mind this movie,but my cousinlove it very much.
After that,we played basketball.It was a nice dayisn’t it?

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Monday August 14th sunny
Today the weather was not very hot,so I went to the movies with my couson.She was very funny and interested.Guess,what film we watched.Oh,it was “Harry Potter and the order of the phoenix.”
I don’t like this movie,but my cousinlove it very much.
After that,we played basketball.It was a nice day isn't it?
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