有一段英语短文一共有5处错误点.我找不出来拜托网友们帮我看看啊!DearMrRogers,WearelookingforahoteltohostoursalesconferenceonMarch.Theprovisionaldatesis10/0313/03,withapproximately30personattending,Wewi

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有一段英语短文一共有5处错误点.我找不出来拜托网友们帮我看看啊!
Dear Mr Rogers,
We are looking for a hotel to host our sales conference on March.The provisional dates is 10/0313/03,with approximately 30 person attending,We will need two conferences rooms with presentation equipment and broadband access.The delegates will need single rooms and one suite,full board,for three nights from the 10/03.Could you let me know the availability of rooms for these dates,and send me a quote for the rooms and equipment.
best regards

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1.on March--------in march 单单月份时,介词用 in
2.dates is---dates are
3.30 person---- 30 persons
4.conferences rooms--conference rooms 做定语的名词很少用复数 (例外women teachers)
5.from the 10/03-----from 10/03