请英文好的朋友帮我修改一下我的英文小作文OnSaturday,oneofmychurchorganizeaBBQatherhome.请英文好的朋友帮我修改一下我的英文小作文OnSaturday,oneofmychurchorganizeaBBQatherhome.Shereadyaverit

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请英文好的朋友帮我修改一下我的英文小作文 On Saturday,one of my church organize a BBQ at her home.
请英文好的朋友帮我修改一下我的英文小作文
On Saturday,one of my church organize a BBQ at her home.She ready a verity things for BBQ.but i think she choose the wrong person to cook them.because when we get food,the food is a litter over cook.But the party was still awesome for me.I met a new friend who is also work in IT.And I think he is a hardware sales and have a range knowledge about some technicg machine which i was very interesting.And a also have a great chatting with my friends.

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On Saturday,one of my churches organized a BBQ at her home.She prepared a variety of things for it,but I think she chose a wrong person to cook them,because when we got some food,they were a little bit over cooked.But the party was still a good one for me.I met a new friend who is also working in IT field.He is a hardware sales and have a