请检查这几篇英语短文指出错误和原因Tuesday,July24thTodaywassunny.Hotweather!Iwenttoswimningwithmybestfriends.Inthepool,thereweremanypeopel.Sokindofcrowded.Butwehadgoodtime.Thenwetoeatalotofthings.Theywe

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请检查这几篇英语短文 指出错误和原因
Tuesday,July 24th
Today was sunny.Hot weather!I went to swimning with my best friends.In the pool,there were many peopel.So kind of crowded.But we had good time.Then we to eat a lot of things.They were very delicious.I liked to eat the ice-cream.I ate tow.After delicious.I liked to eat the ice-cream.I ate tow.After delicious.I liked to eat the ice-cream.I ate tow.After delicious.I liked to eat the ice-cream.I ate tow.After
Tuesday,July 31st
Today was the summer of nine days.These days
playing very happy.Today,I had to be worked hard.
6:00 I got up,eat a bread,a bowl of milk.I wrote a
morning of the homework.I was hungry.I ate a bowl
of noodles they were awful.I watched TV,then
worked hard.From my mother,She cooked dinner
for me.Today,very happy day!
Tuesday,July 10th
Great weather!it was sunny and hot all day.
Today was the first day of our summer vacation.
All of us were very happy.Why?Because we have
tow months to do things we love to do.This made
me feel very happy.But,I had to do many homework.
They were kind of difficult and too many.I hoped
I have a good summer vacation.
Tuesday,July 17th
Today it rained so I went to the supermarke.
It was too crowded so i didn't really enjoy it.Then i got home at
ten o'clockThen I cleaned my room.
That made me feel very tired.After that.I did my
homework.It was kind of difficult.And in the after-
noon,I played pingpong with my friends.It was very
exciting.I liked to play pingpong very much.
另外还想问个问题 英语写日记时什么时候用一般式而不用过去式
如 看到的什么用一般式
虽然有点麻烦请大家仔细点!

Answer 1

1.首先,所有表示天气的应该用一般现在时
2.第一篇文章
“had good time”——改成——“had a good time" 习惯用语表达
“Then we to eat a lot of things”在to前面加上went.
"I liked to eat the ice-cream" 我喜欢吃冰淇淋是陈述一个事实,应该用一般现在时.
3.第二篇文章
"Today was the summer of nine days"是陈述事实,应该用一般现在时
“These days playing very happy.”上面是讲这一天,现在又说这些天,前后矛盾.
"I had to be worked hard."--改成--"I had to work hard."
哎,我没办法帮你全部改完,你错的地方太多了,不当面说的话很难说清楚,你还是向你老师请教吧!