大牛门,帮我改下这篇短短的essay.Iamparticularlyhonoredtohavethisopportunitytoapplyforxxxxx.TherearemanyreasonswhyIwanttoattendthisprogram.FirstofallIameagertoexplorethemysteryofcurrentworldpolitics.Therea

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大牛门,帮我改下这篇短短的essay.
I am particularly honored to have this opportunity to apply for xxxxx.
There are many reasons why I want to attend this program.First of all I am eager to explore the mystery of current world politics.There are numerous reports every morning I wake up,announcing some specific drafts or protocols newly established.And I hope to get this chance to have a whole view of world politics,figure out what will be on stage of this huge arena.Secondly,I am curious about American economy.There is no better place to discuss such thing than in xxxxx,which is launched by the best university in the world .What's more,I could experience the America's culture myself during the program.
I believe I can have a better understanding of the world through this program,and I hope I can share my point of view with the promising youth from America and those outstanding students from China.

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I am particularly honored to get this opportunity to apply for xxxxx.
There are many reasons result in my interview.
Firstly,I am eager to explore the mystery of current world politics.many numerous reports and columns showed on media every morning before I waked up,which announce all kinds of specific drafts or protocols newly established.I,therefore,hope to get this chance in order to forming a macro and real view on world politics,additionly,figuring out what will be on stage of this huge arena.
Secondly,I am curious on American economical situation.There is no better plateform like this can provide me to discuss it than other,which is launched by the top university in the world .What's more,supposing a deeply understanding and objectly recognizing the American culture is also a extra achievement for me if i can be one of crew in the program.
I do believe I can have a deep understanding to the weatern society in it,additionly,sharing and communication my opinion with the promising youth from America and different regions of China also can promote and strengthen relationship among us.