改错:我刚写了一个开头,求指点语法错误.作文的题目是:Ontheimportanceofaname.我刚写了一个开头,求指点语法错误,Sometimespeoplealwaysthinkoverseveralmonthsinordertohaveagoodnamefortheirbabyorfirm.

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改错:我刚写了一个开头,求指点语法错误.
作文的题目是:On the importance of a name.
我刚写了一个开头,求指点语法错误,
Sometimes people always think over several months in order to have a good name for their baby or firm.Whether the good name can predict the good future?On this issue,people have different views.
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Answer 1

think over for several months
第二句whether...这是主语从句,缺少谓语和宾语,建议把can提前,去掉whether,或者加上谓语宾语,如Whether the good name can predict the good future is what the most people pay attention to.