刚写了一篇英语作文.哪位大神能帮我检查检查.免得明天被老师骂~就类似于修改病句吧!Thecityandthecountrysidearebothpopular.Thecityisverynoisyangcrowededtraffic.Butinthecountryside,youcanrunandflya

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刚写了一篇英语作文.哪位大神能帮我检查检查.免得明天被老师骂~就类似于修改病句吧!
The city and the countryside are both popular.The city is very noisy ang croweded traffic.But in the countryside,you can run and fly a kite in the filed.I like living in the city.Because I can see a film ang go shoping in the city.I think living in the city is more convenient in the cuntryside.And the city and countryside are coming better ang better.

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具体没有什么语法错误
但是我想说的是你的the,and用得太多.涉及的方面不够多,套用的句型不够多.这样哪怕你是全对的也是要扣那么一两分的.
希望你能把能容多改改,多参考一下英语书