这是我的英语作文,求好心人帮找错,Ihaveeverbeentoshanghaifortwotimes.Shanghaiisabeautifulcitywithalonghistory.Iknewthatmanycountrieshadinvadeditforlongtimeago.Theyhadbeengrabbedalotoftreasures.Ifindthi

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这是我的英语作文,求好心人帮找错,
I have ever been to shanghai for two times.Shanghai is a beautiful city with a long history.I knew that many countries had invaded it for long time ago.They had been grabbed a lot of treasures.I find this is very shameful.But now people had already set up buildings.I believe that things will get better and better in the future.
这是我写的,当中有一些是特殊的短语有特殊的意思,比如当中的find,不懂得不要给我乱改,求好人,求懂的,这主要是一片现在完成时的作文,

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for two times改成twice