请问下面这句英语我这样改写可以吗?Whenathiefwascaughtonthepremisesoflargejewellerystoreonmorning,theshopassistantsmusthavefounditimpossibletoresistthetemptationtosay'itserveshimright.'Whenathiefwascaug

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请问下面这句英语我这样改写可以吗?
When a thief was caught on the premises of large jewellery store on morning,the shop assistants must have found it impossible to resist the temptation to say 'it serves him right.'
When a thief was caught on the premises of large jewellery store on morning,the shop assistants couldn't have helped but say "it serves him right."

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When a thief was caught on the premises of a large jewellery store in the morning,the shop assistants can't't help saying "it serves him right."
这样更好.