初二英语：请翻译此篇文章(虽然长点，但是不会太难的，烦请朋友耐心点，谢谢）Josephisaverybusy8-year-oldboy.heisgoodatmanykindsofsports.itiseasytoseethatJosephisveryactiveafterschool.incontra

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初二英语：请翻译此篇文章(虽然长点，但是不会太难的，烦请朋友耐心点，谢谢）
Joseph is a very busy 8-year-old boy.he is good at many kinds of sports.it is easy to see that Joseph is very active after school.
in contrast, while most American chidren are in school,they have a PE class just once a week for 45 minutes.boys and girls from Grade 1 to Grade 12 do not have to exercise.
not all American children are as active in sports after school as Joseph. (the health of American children) is in trouble.in fact 40% of children aged 5-8 may be unhealthy already .For example,many are overweight,Doctors believe that these are the results of physical inactivity and poor diet.
in many countries in the world, all school children have to do one hour of exercise every day, these exercises do not have to be team sports.they may not be difficult ,such as running or jumping.Doctors believe that habits learned early are more probable to stay with us all our lives.school is the good place to learn these habits.or practices,active ,healthy children who exercise often can become active, healthy adults.
请问文中括号内的能否写成American children's health?

Answer 1

约瑟夫是一个很忙的8岁的小男孩，他擅长各种运动，很容易看到约瑟夫放学后来很活跃．相反，许多美国的学生，一周只有45分钟的一节体育课，从一年级到十二年级的男孩和女孩都要求锻炼．
不是所有的美国小孩都像约瑟夫一样积极，（美国小孩的健康）有问题．事实上，40％在5到8岁之间的小孩已感不适．例如，很多肥胖．医生相信，这些是不锻炼和饮食所导致的．
在世界上的许多国家，所有的小孩都必要做一个小时的锻炼，这些锻炼不非得是团体运动．它们可以不太难，像跑步和跳高．医生相信，习惯早点养成，更可能在生活中保持，学校是学习这些习惯的好地方．经常锻炼，积极健康的小孩，可以成为有活力，健康的成人．
可以．．好累，好多啊！