假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。作文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个

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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。作文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

  Frank joined in the army after middle school. He did quite well in everything except shooting. One day the new soldiers were practiced shooting. Frank performed poorly while the rest was doing quite well. After he had shot at the target nine times but had not hit once the officer shouted “I had never seen such a fool! Don’t waste away your last bullet! Go behind that wall and shoot yourself with it!” Frank went behind a wall and a few seconds late the sound of a shot was heard by the officer and the other soldier. “Heavens!” the officer said. “ Has that silly man real done so?” He ran behind the wall anxiously only find Frank standing there straight saying “ I’m sorry but I missed again.”

Answer 1

  1.join in去掉in 2.practiced改成 practicing   3.was 改成 were

  4.Had 改成have   5.把away 删掉    6.a改成the   7.late改成later

  8.soldier改成soldiers  9.real改成really  10.only和find 之间加to