假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号

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假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号∧，并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线＼划掉。

修改：在错词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2、只允许修改10处，多者从第11处不计分。

As is known by all with the improvement of people’s living standards cars have become a popular means of transport bring great convenience to our life. However they have also caused some problems such as air pollution and traffic jam.

How can we solve these problems then? As far as I am concerning riding bicycles is a good solution. For one thing bicycles don’t need any petrol but they are energy-saving. For another bicycles are environmentally friendly because of they won’t give off waste gas. Beside riding bicycles is a good way for us to exercise and it is beneficial to our healthy.

As result let’s take the responsibility to build up a low-carbon city by riding bicycles. Come on and join them.

Answer 1

As is known by all with the improvement of people’s living standards cars have

               to

become a popular means of transport bring great convenience to our life. However they

                                   bringing

have also caused some problems such as air pollution and traffic jam.

                                                                 jams

How can we solve these problems then? As far as I am concerning riding bicycles

                                                     concerned

is a good solution. For one thing bicycles don’t need any petrol but they are

                                                                   and

energy-saving. For another bicycles are environmentally friendly because of they

won’t give off waste gas. Beside riding bicycles is a good way for us to exercise

                           Besides

and it is beneficial to our healthy.

                            health

As∧result let’s take the responsibility to build up a low-carbon city by riding

  a

bicycles. Come on and join them.

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