假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺

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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误 每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处 多者（从第11处起）不计分。
When I am a child I always wished to become an adult so that I could do all what I liked. I wanted to have more space where I was able to follow my own heart without follow my parents’ instructions. As time going by I have grown up gradually but I find things are quite different from what I expect. I do have the free to do more things alone. Moreover I have to take on much responsibilities. I have to take the charge of my life and face challenges bravely. Now I am determined to work hardly and go to college so that I can have a bright future.

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【小题1】am改为was【小题2】去掉all或what改为that【小题3】follow改为following【小题4】As改为With或going改为went【小题5】expect改为expected【小题6】free改为freedom【小题7】Moreover改为 However【...