Afterreceivingthenews,immediatemeasureshadbeentakenbythelocalgovernmenttofightagainstthesnowdiasaster.中after领导一个状语从句,主句主语是immediatemeasures与从句主语不一致啊,为什么从句可以省略主语直

Question

After receiving the news ,immediate measures had been taken by the local government to fight
against the snow diasaster.
中after领导一个状语从句,主句主语是immediate measures 与从句主语不一致啊,为什么从句可以省略主语直接加receiving,

Answer 1

可以肯定地告诉楼主,你说得很对,你的句子有语病.
英语语法规定,用分词短语做状语,或者when,after等时间状语从句省略主语,改为when/after doing 形式的前提,是前后两个句子的主语相同.很明显,楼主的这个句子不符合这个条件.所以,要将句子改为主动句,让the local government 做句子的主语和前面状语的逻辑主语.此外,主句也不宜用过去完成时had been taken,应该改为一般过去时took,而将完成时态放在前面的状语中（当然用After receiving 也是对的）.因为根据句意,received the news的动作是发生在took measure之前的.
正确表达应为：（After） having received the news ,the local government took immediate measures to fight.(或者After receiving the news,the local government took immediate measure to fight.)这里的after还可以省去.