请大神帮我看看我写的英文介绍有什么语句错误的地方麻烦帮我指出来并改正3QGoodmorning,mynameisLiuFeng.Iamverygladtohavethisopportunitytointerview,Ihopethattoday'sperformance,Eventuallyjointhisbi

Question

请大神帮我看看我写的英文介绍 有什么语句错误的地方 麻烦帮我指出来 并改正 3Q
Good morning,my name is Liu Feng .I am very glad to have this opportunity to interview,I hope that today's performance,Eventually join this big family.I briefly introduce myself,i am twenty-five years old ,The people of Shenyang,Graduated from Shenyang radio and TV University Administration Professional,Had done 1 years in the Great Wall broadband network maintenance.Learning Cisco network products,Very fond of computer network,I hope you can give me a chance,I will do my best.Thank you!

Answer 1

呃.似乎写的不是很好.Good morning everyone .My name is Liufeng ,Very happy to have the chance to introduct myself at this opportunity ,Today is a great day .