英语句子改错将下列句子改错.句子背景是已发生的9.11.1.Lastedjustseconds,heknewheneededtogetone.2.Thestoryhasended.3.Ican'thelpthinkingofthoseschockscene.4.Ihadshockedatwhatmyhusbanddid.5.Itwasterriblef

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英语句子改错
将下列句子改错.句子背景是已发生的9.11.
1.Lasted just seconds ,he knew he needed to get one.
2.The story has ended.
3.I can't help thinking of those schock scene.
4.I had shocked at what my husband did.
5.It was terrible for me that heard the bad news which my husband ,Harry Ramos ,was lot when the attacked happened.
6.My husband was deaded/has been died in the 9.11.
7.You may didn't know that everyone there were moved by you.
8.My husband ,Ramos ,who was missing in the 911 attack .No because he couldn't get rid of the accident but because in the dilemma he chosen to save others.
9.My husband still standing with the heavyset man.
应该大多是语法或时态的错误吧,多多指教

Answer 1

1、非谓语主语不一致,lasted 改为 lasting
2、has去掉,表示瞬间完成的动作,不用完成时
3、shock scene改为shocking scenes,“骇人的情景”
4、had 改为 was “被吓到”
5、heard 改为 hearing我觉得整个句子应该改成：.It was terrible for me that hearing the bad news that my husband ,Harry Ramos ,was lost when the attacked happened.这是一个强调句It is...that...和定语从句.Hearing the bad news was terrible for me是强调句的原形.the bad news 后面的从句应该用that引导.
6、deaded改为dead； has been died 改为 died
7、didn't 改为 not；were改为was
8、.No 改成,not
9、standing改为stands