Thedigitalage,我写了一小段,求指点语法错误,作文标题是:Thedigitalage,我写了一小段,求指点语法错误,Withmoreandmoredigitalproductsareusedwidelyinourlife,weenteredthedigitalage.Weusecomputertoprocess

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The digital age ,我写了一小段,求指点语法错误,
作文标题是:The digital age ,我写了一小段,求指点语法错误,
With more and more digital products are used widely in our life,we entered the digital age.We use computer to process the documents at office,we watch digital TV at home,and we listen to MP3 whether we are taking the buses or trains.It seems that we each do one thing that will always accompany with the digital product.

Answer 1

With more and more digital products are used widely in our life,we (此处加上：have) entered （加上：into）the digital age.We use computer to process the documents at (at 改为:in) office,we watch digital TV at home,and we listen to MP3 whether(whether 改为:when) we are taking the (are taking the 改为：take) buses or trains.It seems that we each do one thing that will always accompany with the digital product.(最后一句改为：It seems that for each thing we do,the digital product will always accompany with us.)