英语翻译高血压患病率有较大幅度升高.18岁及以上居民高血压患病率为18.8%,全国患病人数约为1.6亿多；高血压知晓率仅为30.2%,治疗率为24.7%,控制率为6.1%.Theincidenceofhighbloodpressureisincreasing

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高血压患病率有较大幅度升高.18岁及以上居民高血压患病率为18.8%,全国患病人数约为1.6亿多；高血压知晓率仅为30.2%,治疗率为24.7%,控制率为6.1%.
The incidence of high blood pressure is increasing.It is 18.8% among 18+ years old.In China more than 160million have high blood pressure,among which detection rate is 30.2%,treatment rate is 24.7%,and control rate is 6.1%.
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后半部分这样也可以了,或者可以更紧凑一点：
More than 160 million Chinese people have high blood pressure,among which the detection rate,treatment rate and control rate are 30.2%,24.7% and 6.1% respectively.