英语语法错误帮我检查一下有什么语法上的错误,最好是直接在原文上修改L:Today,wearegoingtotalkaboutthefilmcalled"IRONMAN2".Doyouknowsomethingaboutthefilm?H:Yes,itwasquiteexcitingandalsoveryexcellent.

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英语语法错误
帮我检查一下有什么语法上的错误,最好是直接在原文上修改
L:Today,we are going to talk about the film called "IRON MAN 2".Do you know something about the film?
H:Yes,it was quite exciting and also very excellent.
L:And,do you know about some characters on the film
H:Of course,I know the leading role Tony Stark ,he was the iron man.A kidnapping was changed his life forever.He was made a steel armour for himself when he was made weaponry for the terrorists .Then he improved the steel armour .From then on ,he became the real iron man.What about you?Do you know other characters on the film?
L:Yes,I know the Pepper Potts.Pepper Potts,a gumptious,and charming woman assistant by Tony Stark's side,she always gives "iron man" meticulous care and help.Do you know some villain characters on the film?
H:Yes,Natasha Romanoff was Soviet super spy,she was beautiful and she often with evil wear black tights high-tech weapons.
L:OK,you are right.And I know Whiplash is the big villain in this film who is the commercial rival of "Iron Man"Tony Stark.Do you know the director of the film?
H:Yes,the film was made by Jon Favreau .He was a great director.He was directed some success film,such as Zathura and so on.Do you know what was "IRON MAN 2" talk about?
L;When Stark was element poisoning,crazy physicist developed cottage steel-man to challenge stark,but he was fail.Stark with his friends and the help of his father's possessions,addressed the element poisoning,and they killed the crazy physicist and his iron-man army.

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L:Today,we are going to talk about the film called "IRON MAN 2".Do you know ANYTHING about the film?
H:Yes,it was quite exciting and also QUITE excellent.
L:And,do you know about ANY characters IN the film
H:Of course,I know the leading role Tony Stark ,he was the iron man.A kidnapping HAS changed his life forever.He MADE a steel armour for himself when he was made INTO weaponry for the terrorists .Then he improved the steel armour .From then on ,he became the real iron man.What about you?Do you know other characters IN the film?
L:Yes,I know Pepper Potts.Pepper Potts,a gumptious,and THE charming woman assistant by Tony Stark's side,she always gives "iron man" meticulous care and help.Do you know ANY villain characters IN the film?
H:Yes,Natasha Romanoff IS Soviet super spy,she IS beautiful and she often with evil WEARS black tights high-tech weapons.
L:OK,you are right.And I know Whiplash is the big villain in this film who is the commercial rival of "Iron Man"Tony Stark.Do you know the director of the film?
H:Yes,the film was made by Jon Favreau .He IS a great director.He HAS directed some SUCCESSFUL FILMS,such as Zathura and so on.Do you know what "IRON MAN 2" WAS about?
L;When Stark was element poisoning,crazy physicist developed cottage steel-man to challenge stark,but he FAILED.Stark,with his friends and the help of his father's possessions,addressed the element poisoning,and they killed the crazy physicist and his iron-man army.