请人帮我修改一段英文(9)FACEVALUEExceptionalskincare.Excellentvalue.脸面的价值超群的皮肤护理.超值享受.Theoriginalmeaningof“Facethevalue”is“facevalue”,referstovaluewhichonthebillorthecurrencypap

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请人帮我修改一段英文
(9) FACE VALUE
Exceptional skin care.Excellent value.
脸面的价值
超群的皮肤护理.超值享受.
The original meaning of “Face the value” is “face value”,refers to value which on the bill or the currency paper surface indicated,here figure of honour value,has double meaning.Here refers to human's face skin is the most important and at the same time it means the money will cost much at the.Therefore must use outstanding skin nursing to protect.It only can be translate by transliterate method.
(10)Catch the Rain cheetahs and cheat the rain.
有了“Rain cheetahs”牌雨衣,你就可以与雨嬉戏.
This is one of the raincoat advertisement,Rain cheetahs is the raincoat sign,it has used pun well,because it unison with “rain cheater”,“rain cheater” is (windproof coat) grows from windcheater,however,it gets down the half a word to use the “cheat” this unison verb to constitute double meaning,it has not let the human produce talkatively takes the trouble the feeling,firmly holds reader's attention actually.
(11) Part-time Job
Earn Xtra Money.
业余兼活,外快多多.
This advertisement literal translation meaning is:the xtra-curricular work,gains the additional income.Advertisement to fabricate word “Xtra”,from the pronunciation,in the semantics and linguistic environment may look as miswritten words or the variation of “extra”.The unison letter X has replaced in original character EX /eks/.Thus makes the original character to deep its connotation significance in its original meaning foundation,enormously strengthen the expression effect of original character.Because of the letter “X” not only unison with the letter combination “EX”,in mathematics terminology,as everybody known,it expresses as “the unknown”,thus increased naturally the new significance to give the meaning which the human’s infinite association contained.While extra has the meaning of “extra,especially big”,looks at this attractive advertisement,who cannot be eager to try?Therefore,the character changed achieves both in novel and the humorous rhetoric effect.
From the examples,it can be seen that the punning meanings in original text which readers understand are lost,therefore,the author believed,only if unable to use other translate method,the translator should consider use the method of transliteration.
(12)There’s never a better time.
此时不戴,更待何时.
This is the advertisement of Raymond Weil watch.It both means “keep a better time” and “have a good time”.It is difficult to transmit the text meaning by literally translation,so we can take advantage of a common sentence pattern in Chinese:“When this time...doesn't do ” when translate,the translation is “this time does not wear,when wear?”

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修改完了的文章如下：
(9) FACE VALUE
Exceptional skin care. Excellent value.
脸面的价值
超群的皮肤护理,超值享受.
The original meaning of “Face the value” is “face value”, refers to value which on the bill or the currency paper surface indicated, here figure of honour value, has double meanings. Here refers to human being's face skin is the most important and at the same time it means the money will cost much meanwhile. Therefore, you must use outstanding skin care to protect it. It only can be translated by transliterate method.
(10)Catch the Rain cheetahs and cheat the rain.
有了“Rain cheetahs”牌雨衣,你就可以与雨嬉戏.
This is one of the raincoat advertisements, Rain cheetahs is the raincoat sign, it has used pun as well, because it is in unison with “rain cheater”, “rain cheater” is (a windproof coat) grows from windcheater, however, it gets down the half of a word to use the “cheat” to constitute a double meaning, it has not let the human produce talkatively takes the trouble the feeling, firmly holds reader's attention actually.
(11) Part-time Job
Earn Xtra Money.
业余兼活,外快多多.
This advertisement's literal meaning is: the xtra-curricular work, gains the additional income. Advertisement to fabricate word “Xtra”, from the pronunciation, in the semantics and linguistic environment may look as miswritten words or the variation of “extra”. The unison letter X has replaced in original character EX /eks/. Thus it makes the original character to deepen its connotation significance in its original meaning foundation, enormously strengthen the expression effect of a original character. Because of the letter “X” not only unison with the letter combination “EX”, in mathematics terminology, as everybody knows, it expresses as “the unknown”, thus increased naturally the new significance to give the meaning which the human’s infinite association contained. While extra has the meaning of “extra, especially big”, looks at this attractive advertisement, who cannot be eager to try? Therefore, the character changed achieves both in novel and the humorous rhetorical effect.
From the examples above, it can be seen that the punning meanings in the original text which readers understand are lost, therefore, the author believed, only if unable to use other translation method, the translator should consider the method of transliteration.
(12)There’s never a better time.
时不我待.
This is the advertisement of Raymond Weil watch. It both means “keep a better time” and “have a good time”. It is difficult to deliver the text meaning by literal translation, so we can take advantage of a common sentence pattern in Chinese: “When this time... doesn't do ” when translated, the translation is “this time does not wear, when wear?”