这个报告蹩脚么?StudyonCollegestudents’NightLifeIntroductionPurpose:Unlikehighschoollife,studentshavemuchmorefreedomincollege,wheretheyhavetolearnhowtoorganizetheirleisuretime.Thisstudyisaimedtofindingoutcollege

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这个报告蹩脚么?
Study on College students’ Night Life
Introduction
Purpose:Unlike high school life,students have much more freedom in college,where they have to learn how to organize their leisure time.This study is aimed to finding out college students’ living and study state by investigating how they spend their night life.At the end of this report we will give them some suggestions to help them improve life quality in college.
Significance:Three or Four years fly easily.Different achievements of graduates in this period of time are partly decided by their mastering of time.Night life is a special part of this period.If a student is able to spend it meaningfully,he will surely make a big difference.Thus a survey on this topic is of great significance in alerting college students to cherish their time.And since college students’ night life is affected by schools’ policies.If schools get to know students’ views and complaints on their arrangements and make some adjustments according to them,not only can students make better use of their time,but also schools can win a friendly image in students’ hearts.
Members of our Group
李园（200900052026） 李行一（200900052024）
高源（200900052013） 张梦石（200900051087）
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Procedure
First,we made the questionnaire after learning about the night life of some classmates basically and thinking over ours.In the questionnaire,there are 15 questions (including choice questions,multiply-choice questions and essay questions) picked up from 25,which we think are most meaningful and can reflect college students’ night life on all sides.
Then,we sent out our questionnaires to 30 students belonging to different schools of Shandong University as our subjects in this survey,who consist of both males and females.
Next,we recycled them and transformed part of the written materials into statistics.We also made some charts and diagrams to show the results more clearly.
And next,we had to analyze all the data from different angles and try to list several suggestions.Our analyses are based on comparing the answers of students who can nicely arrange their night life with those who can’t.In this way,we find more and more clues to giving them suggestions.
In the end,we had a meeting together,make sure the basic content of our report and assign Li Yuan and Li Xingyi to write it.

Answer 1

I can see your efforts in writing this report. As a Chinese, it makes perfect sense to me. However, I’m afraid it will make little sense to any foreigner in English-speaking countries. In other words, “Chinglish” is too evident in the report. Anyway, I believe it could be much better as long as you make some revisions.