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英语找语病ifamanwhohasasettledpurposewillsurelysucceed.Becausehealwayshasway,andeverythingwillcometohimwhathewants.这句有哪些错误的地方

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英语找语病
if a man who has a settled purpose will surely succeed.Because he always has way,and everything will come to him what he wants.这句有哪些错误的地方
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If a man has a settled purpose,he will surely succeed.Because he always has a way and everything he wants will come to him.
这是在原句基础上改动,若整体改动可采用一楼的改法,较通顺.
或者:A man with a settled purpose will surely succeed.Because he always has a way and what he wants will come to him.