请大家看下这段话说的合适吗?haveapresumptuousrequestthatIdonotknowwhetheritisappropriatetotellyou.IsawfromtheemailthatMr.MacraeisinUniversityofWarwick.IknowitisoneofthetopuniversityintheUKandalsoran

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请大家看下这段话说的合适吗?
have a presumptuous request that I do not know whether it is appropriate to tell you.I saw from the email that Mr.Macrae is in University of Warwick.I know it is one of the top university in the UK and also ranks first place in Media and Communication according to the university rankiing 2010 on Times.Hereby I had never thought of applying for this university for I am not very confident on doing this thing.Since I knew Mr.Macrae is working in this university,I am not sure if it is appropriate to ask him does he think I have the chance to apply for University of Warwick.I know Mr.Macrae is in a different department,so could you give me some tips on this matter?

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保证老外能看懂.就是稍显啰嗦.没问题啦!