初三英语作文thatmoment,lfelt（我填surprised)开始写：Yesterdaymyschoolhadaparentsmeeting.Whenmyfatherlefthome,Ifeltthedoomsdayhadtoapproach.Thenlbagantoconsidertheconsequences.Soonorlater,whenthedoorope

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初三英语作文
that moment,l felt ______（我填surprised)
开始写：Yesterday my school had a parents meeting.When my father left home,I felt the doomsday had to approach.Then l bagan to consider the consequences.Soon or later,when the door opened,I had already prepare for a violent storm.To my surprise,Dad"s face with a smile.Then he told me about my score:"you got a "A"in the maths text.No words could describe how surprised l was.
大致翻译：昨天是家长会,当我爸爸出门,我感到世界末日就要来临了.然后我开始考虑后果.不久之后,我爸爸回来了,我已经准备迎接暴风骤雨.出乎我意料的是,我爸爸脸上充满微笑.紧接着他告诉我你在数学考试中获得好成绩.没有单词可以描绘我当时是多么的吃惊.
我喜欢的学校生活.
Our school life is almost perfect.But the only regret is the teachers always delay the class over.When the teacher dragged the class,Always came around whining.The teacher always feel that it is indifferent.But for our purposes,it is so important to have a good rest.I hope this will change and my wish come true.
翻译：我的学校生活近乎完美.但唯一遗憾的是老师总是拖堂.当老师拖堂.我经常能听到周围传来抱怨声.但是老师一直认为那没什么搭界的.但对于我们而言,没有比休息还重要的事情了.我希望这一切改变,我的愿望实现（纯属凑字数.）

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第一篇：Yesterday my school had a parents meeting.(这句可改成：the parents meeting was held in my school)When my father left home(这句可以用leave for 动身前往...when my father left for it),I felt the doomsday had to approach.(可用过去进行时表示“过去的将来”i felt like my doomsday was coming)Then l bagan to consider the consequences.(这里+上句I had my heart in my mouth."“我的心提到嗓子眼儿了”)Soon or later,when the door opened,I had already prepare （过去分词prepared）for a violent storm.To my surprise,Dad"s face with a smile（Dad went in with a smile on his face）.Then he told me about my score(+s):"you(you've) got a(an) "A"in the maths(去掉s) text.No words could describe how surprised l was.（+at that moment就更好啦）
第二篇：Our school life is almost perfect.（第一句可以扩展点：So what is the school life like in my heart? Maybe i will describe it as"almost perfect"）But the only regret is the teachers always delay the class over.(这句可改成 the only imperfect point is that the teachers always lengthen the classes)When the teacher dragged the class,Always came around whining.(这句可改成the complaint will be booming all over the whole class if the teachers don't finish the class on time)The teacher always feel that it is indifferent.(这句可改成it may make no difference for teachers)But for our purposes,it is so important to have a good rest.(这句可改成nothing is more important than taking a break after concentrating a lot )I hope this will change and my wish come true. (“这一点得是被改变”i hope it can be changed and my tiny wish will soon come true)