请大家帮我检查一下我的英语值日报告我知道我写出的值日报告就像才上初一的小妹妹写的,不过还是希望大家来帮我检查一下哈.错的指出来就好了,没关系,我脸皮厚得很!Hi,Boysandgirs!Haveyou

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请大家帮我检查一下我的英语值日报告
我知道我写出的值日报告就像才上初一的小妹妹写的,不过还是希望大家来帮我检查一下哈.错的指出来就好了,没关系,我脸皮厚得很!
Hi,Boys and girs!Have you ever watched Do you know SuXing?His English is Allen Su.His singing god is Craig David.And Allen Inversion is his forever hero.He studys in Australia for7years.Now,he is 23years old .He joins in the in this years'summer.He said,"He sing every song as the last song.”I see he thinks highly of the song in the sentence.When he hear oters abuse him,he always say,"I don't care.”He loves his mother besr.He is grateful to his partents and fans.Because he thinks they give him a lot of loves and encourages all the time.He always say,"I am nobody without you.”The show was fishing.The new beginning,he should the walker the better.I hopes.
Thanks for listening.
Q:What is his Eglish name?
Who is he best loves?
p.s.打了好久才打完

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Hi,Boys and girls!Have you ever watched Super Boy?
Do you know Su Xing?He is also known as Allen Su.His favourite singer is Craig David.And Allen Inverson is his favourite basketball player?.He had studied in Australia for 7 years.Now,he is 23 years old.He joined the Super Boy during this summer.He said,"He sing every song as he is singing the last song.”( i rather put it as,He will put in his very best as if the song will be the last song to be sang by him in the contest.)
I feel that he is quite arrogant.He think highly of himself and not willing to accept criticism
When he heard abusive words from others targeting at him,he always say,"I don't care.”
He loves his mother best.He is grateful to his parents and fans as they have showering him with love and encouragement all the time.
He always say,"I am nobody without you.”
The show was fishing.The new beginning,he should the walker the better.(I simply don't get it.Totally filled with errors)
Thanks for listening.