高中英语改病句,中等级别的要题，带答案的那种

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高中英语改病句,中等级别的
要题，带答案的那种

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There are advantage for students to work while 76.__________
studying at school.One of them was that 77.__________
they can earn money.For the most part,78.__________
students working to earn money for their own 79.__________
use.Earning their own money allow them 80.__________
to spend on anything as if they please.81.__________
They would have to ask their parents for 82.__________
money or for permission to do things by 83.__________
the money.Some students may also to save 84.__________
up for our college or future use.85.__________
答案：
76.名词advantage为可数名词,从下文来看讲的不止是一个好处,因此应该用复数advantages；
77.谓语时态错误全篇以一般现在时说理为主,此处句子用一般过去时没有道理,所以把was 改为 is；
78 对的
79.整个句子没有谓语,不合语法,故把非谓语动词working 改为谓语形式work；
80.此行中句子动名词作主语谓语 allow 应该用三单（单三）形式,故把谓语 allow 改为 allows；
81.连词 as if (好像)意义此处不合句意,应把if删掉保留连词as(就像)；
82和83是相互关系在一个句子中的,该句的意思应为“有了这些钱,再想做什么时就不用向父母要钱或是得到父母的同意了”因此83题的介词by有问题,应该用with表示“有了”的意思,82小题应该是不用向父母要钱,应该是否定句,故把would改为wouldn't;
84.为情态动词后面应该跟不带 to 的动词不定式,故把 to 删掉；
85.全文以第三人称为主,此行突然出现 our 不合适,应把 our 改为their