英语改错.10处Aterribleaccidenthappenedatthecorn英语改错.10处AterribleaccidenthappenedatthecornerofMainStreetthismorningwhenthegroundwaswetafteraheavyrainyesterdayevening.Atruckcarryingoutalargequantityof

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英语改错.10处 A terrible accident happened at the corn
英语改错.10处
A terrible accident happened at the corner of Main Street this morning when the ground was wet after a heavy rain yesterday evening.A truck carrying out a large quantity of chemicals knocked into a car running in a very high speed.A fire broke out immediately with a terribly smell.The driver of the truck,together with two people in it were killed,and five other people were injured.Not until over an hour later the traffic return to normal.According to the police who rushed to a sence,the cause of the accident still remains unknown,so they believe that the wet ground and the carelessness of the truck driver were both responsible for them.They warned driver to be careful when they drove in the street,especially on rainy days.
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A terrible accident happened at the corner of Main Street this morning when the ground was wet after a heavy rain yesterday evening. 1,When 改成where
A truck carrying out a large quantity of chemicals knocked into a car running in a very high speed. ,2, in 改成 at
A fire broke out immediately with a terribly smell. terribly 改成了 terrible
The driver of the truck, together with two people in it were killed, and five other people were injured. ,3,第一个were 改成was 因为主语是driver ,4,five other 前面加个冠词“the" 表示特指其他的五个人
Not until over an hour later the traffic return to normal. 5,over去掉（重复）6,later后面加上”did"（因为not until 放在句首,主句要用倒装句）
According to the police who rushed to a sence, the cause of the accident still remains unknown, so they believe that the wet ground and the carelessness of the truck driver were both responsible for them. 7,sence改成scene（因为是现场的意思）8,so 改成but（连词用错了）
自我觉得在此处的两个动词也有问题,remains 我觉得应该改成 remained believe 应该改成believed 因为整篇文章讲述的都是过去发生的事
They warned driver to be careful when they drove in the street, especially on rainy days.
9. driver改成drivers（因为后面的主语是they）10,drove改成drive（因为warn 后面的句子是虚拟语气 此处省略了should 所以应该是drive 原形）
你看看吧,我觉得都有12处错误了