写了一篇简单的英文演讲稿,但深知毛病很多,求哪位朋友帮忙看看哪个地方有什么错误,YouareaiwaysinmyheartEverytime,whenilookuptothesky,Ioftentellmyself,thebrightestthestarisyouandyouwillbewithme

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写了一篇简单的英文演讲稿,但深知毛病很多,求哪位朋友帮忙看看哪个地方有什么错误,
You are aiways in my heart
Everytime,when i look up to the sky,I often tell myself,the brightest the star is you and you will be with me forever.
Remember i was a child,i lived with you.You was very kind and i thought you was very smart.You helped me do mathmatics.I thought these exercise was complex,but you can deal with them within a few minutes.
In my memory,you liked drink tea.You aiways make a cup of tea.You know i like eat sweet,so in your tea will contain sugar,although you don't like it.You like to plant vegetable in your backyard.such as small tomatoes,cucumbers,eggplants.Untill the mature season you always pick for me to eat.
You are very sharp,you can cut the pencil very nice,you also can cook delicious food.You often let me to be NO.1.
Do you know?I miss you very much.I know you has gone to another world,but i just want you know,you are always in my heart.
（时态、单复数、语法结构、哪里有问题都请告诉我,感激不尽.）

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You are aiways in my heart
Everytime,when i look into the sky,I often tell myself,the brightest star in my blue sky is you and you will be with me forever.
I still remember when I was a child,I have been living with you for a long time.You was tremendously kind and i thought you was exceedingly smart.You helped me cope with those tough mathmatics problems.At that time,I thought these exercise was too complex for me to approach them by my own,but you can deal with them within a few minutes.
In my memory,you enjoyed drinking tea.You aiways made a cup of tea for you and me.You know i like eating sweet,so your tea was always added with sugar by you,though (although是不能放在句子末尾的,如果要用的话,只能选though)you don't like it.You also like to plant vegetables in your backyard.such as small tomatoes,cucumbers,eggplants.When the mature season approaches,you always pick a lot for me to have a taste.
You are very ingenious(sharp是形容一把刀很锋利,而不能形容一个人很锋利,),you can cut the pencil quickly and nicely ,you can also cook delicious food.You often let me to taste at first
Do you know?I miss you very much.I know you has gone to another world,but i just miss you much,you are always in my heart.The days when we spent togetherwill never fade from my memory!