我英语论文有2句话word显示有问题,找英语高手Hi我,帮我修改一下,Hi我,我发那2句话···Johnstridedintotheseniormiddle-school,whichwasthemostfamousschoolinhiscity,withpowerfulstepsandlightensmile.Actually,yo

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我英语论文有2句话word显示有问题,
找英语高手Hi我,
帮我修改一下,
Hi我,我发那2句话···
John strided into the senior middle-school,which was the most famous school in his city,with powerful steps and lighten smile.
Actually,your judgment lack of argument.
Came black to his seat,with many attentions on him,John feel peaceful,actually only books could change his mind.
是3句= =
我不是要翻译，是要改错= =

Answer 1

没有stride into 这词组吧,stride 是跨越的意思,还有,senior school ,middle school哪来senior middle-school ,第二句,lack of ,of 可以去掉,或者改成is lacking in ,第三句错得离谱,句式杂揉.可以分为几句,开头应该用伴随状态coming