我写了一篇英文作为,发表一下意见.不过我才五年级.MyfamilyHello,MynameisDanCui1,Iwasastudent.Myfatherisadriver,mymotherwasastaffmember.MydadliketowatchTVatnight,hedidthedishesareverytasty.Mymotherli

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我写了一篇英文作为,发表一下意见.不过我才五年级.
My family
Hello,My name is Dan Cui 1,I was a student.My father is a driver,my mother was a staff member.My dad like to watch TV at night,he did the dishes are very tasty.My mother like to exercise in the morning,dancing very well.We are a happy family.

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Hello,My name is Dan Cui,I am(not "was",因为你现在也是学生呀,所以不要用过去时）a student.My father is a driver,my mother is （如果爸爸用is,为什么妈妈要用was呢?） a staff member.My dad likes (like-第三人称要加S) to watch TV at night,his dishes (不要用he did the dishes,不然这个句子里有两个动词) are very tasty.My mother likes (第三人称加S) to exercise in the morning,and she dances (dancing) very well.We are a happy family.