这个是病句吧?Ontheoccasionofyourbirthday,onbehalfofthehotel’sstaffaswellasonmyownbehalftoextendmysincerehopeallofthebestwishesenterintothiscardexpressourdeeplywish.这个句子大致能猜出意思.可是详

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这个是病句吧?
On the occasion of your birthday,on behalf of the hotel’s staff as well as on my own behalf to extend my sincere hope all
of the best wishes enter into this card express our deeply wish.
这个句子大致能猜出意思.可是详细分析起来,怎么觉得这是个病句,到处的错误?
请老师指教!

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这是一个病句 ,正确的句子应该是：
On the occasion of your birthday,I am on behalf of the hotel’s staff as well as on my own behalf to extend my sincere hope all of the best wishes enter into this card to express our deeply wish.在在你生日之际,我代表酒店的工作人员以及对我个人的名义致以诚挚的希望,愿所有的美好祝愿都在这张贺卡里,以表达我们深深的祝福.