Iamaneasygoingperson,Icangetalongwellwithothers,thisismyoutstandingcharacter.Ifeelit’sveryimportant,notjustwhenIamastudent,butwhenIamastaffinacompany.这句话有没有语法错误,notjust,but的用法正确吗,欢

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I am an easy going person,I can get along well with others,this is my outstanding character.I feel it’s very important,not just when I am a student,but when I am a staff in a company.
这句话有没有语法错误,not just,but的用法正确吗,欢迎指正,

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I am an easy going person and I can get along well with others.This is my outstand character.I feel this is important for my life,not only when I was a student,but also now when I am working in a company.
符号可以改一下,逗号后面要解连接词.and but之类的.学生应该是以前的事吧,要用过去时.