不知道是否有错,或者用得不恰当的地方,Hi.everybody,goodevening.Now.Iwilltalkaboutmyexercise,I’msolazy,Idon’tlikeexercise.but,whenIreadtheprimaryschool,I’mveryliketoplaytabletennis.Now,Ihavelongtimeno

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不知道是否有错,或者用得不恰当的地方,
Hi .everybody ,good evening.Now .I will talk about my exercise,I’m so lazy ,I don’t like exercise.but,when I read the primary school,I’m very like to play table tennis.Now,I have long time no exercise.A few days ago,I heared about the Plank ,I’m try to do ,every day .I can keep one and a half minutes.(one minute and a half),I feel very good,so ,I hope I can keep it .that’s all ,thank you very much .

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楼上的好专业,改的真好!怎么不继续?
鄙人才疏学浅,尽力续之.
Good evening,everybody. Now, I would like to talk about my exercise. Actually I am a little bit lazy,I don't do exercise much. However, I did like playing table-tennis when I was in my primary school years.
It's been a long time that I didn't do exercise.But,a couple days ago,I heared about the Plank,and I tried to do it everyday,I can keep it for one minute and a half,I felt very good,so I hope I could stick to it.that's all,thank you very much.
PS:Plank是什么意思