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将下列英语短文进行改错
dear editor i'm wring to tell you about how we students use computers in our daily life some use
them in a good way when some others don't.as far as i am concerned,more ahd more students now use computers help with their study.if we meet some difficulties when they are doing their homework,they always got help from the internet.to spend their spare time,they look for more informations with the computers to have much more knowledge.at the same time,however,the great number of students are still so interested in PC games and chatted with others on the internet that they can not force themselves to return to their study .they really in dangerous.that is how we mainly use computers.they can either do good and harm to

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第一,这篇作文每一句打头词的第一位字母都必须改成大写.
有些句子不同我也稍稍改或加了一些词.
以下是我自己改过的,应该没有错.:3
Dear editor,
I'm writing to tell you about how we students use computers in our daily life.Some use
them in a good way when some others don't.
As far as i am concerned,more and more students now use computers to help with their study.If they meet some difficulties when they are doing their homework,they always get help from the internet.
To spend their spare time,they look for more information with the computers to have much more knowledge.At the same time,however,the great number of students are still so interested in PC games and chatting with others on the internet that they can not force themselves to return to their study.They are really in danger.
That is how we mainly use computers.They can either do both good or harm to us.
不知道是不是你要的.