我写了一封信给我的偶像,但我英语不太行,希望哪位高手帮我看一下这里面有哪些要改的,Hallo,xx,i'myourchinesefans.Iamhappyforthatihavethisopportunitytowritealettertoyou.Thankyoubroughtmejoy,youare

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我写了一封信给我的偶像,但我英语不太行,希望哪位高手帮我看一下这里面有哪些要改的,
Hallo,xx,i'm your chinese fans.
I am happy for that i have this opportunity to write a letter to you.Thank you brought me joy,you are just as important as god for me!
When i come across the discouragement,i will listening to your songs,watch your videos.See you have made efforts for your dream,i realised that was just a nothing what i face,there is no reason that I chould escape.So,i screwed up my courage and overcome my difficulties.All this is because you give me courage.Thank a lot.
I saw your efforts,and i believe you can succeed.Now you face with the stage of the world,there is a long way to go,but i'll be rooting for you.Go head!Just make the music which you want to make,all fans will support you anytime.
Wish you happy forever.

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我给你改了改,语法有很多错误.
Hallo,xx,i'm one of your chinese fans.
I appreciate for the chance that i could write a letter to you.Thank you for bringing me all the joy,you are just important like the god to me!
When i came across the discouragements,i would listen to your songs and watch your videos.By seeing what you have made efforts for your dream,i realized what i have to face is like nothing.There is no reason that I should escape.This way,i took my courages and overcame my difficulties.All because you had given me courage.Thanks a lot.
I saw you hard working,and i believe you will be successful.Now,you face the audience of the world,there is a long way to go.Surely,i'll be here for you.Go head!Just make the music that you want to make.All your fans will support and love you as much as they could..
Wish you happy forever.