英语作文修改,帮忙看一下是否有地方不恰当或者是不通顺.只修改有问题的地方,希望不要随便换近义词.HORRORMOVIEThehorrormovieisamoviewhichcreatesanatmosphereeerie;itsthemesarehorrorandusuallycontai

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英语作文修改,帮忙看一下是否有地方不恰当或者是不通顺.只修改有问题的地方,希望不要随便换近义词.
HORROR MOVIE
The horror movie is a movie which creates an atmosphere eerie;its themes are horror and usually contain some violent incidents to make theaudience the creeps.
The first horror movie is 《Frankenstein》.It produced in 1910 and is only 16 minuteslong.《Frankenstein》is a silentand black-and-white movie,combined with peculiar characteristic ofexpressionism,it created a good atmosphere of terror.
Depending on the region,I classify the horror movie into twocategories:
European and American movie
They advocate visual impact.Movies generally take a bloodykilling technique to demonstrate the process of suffering of the victim'sappearance.Creators through extremely cruel means,dripping blood,the cry ofpain and other elements of these films,to make the film to produce a"disgusting type" terrorist effect.
This type of movie likes to create a killer and this killeris immortal o the extradimensional creatures,they are highly lethal.Typically,if the human and alien battle,the humans will die miserable.The horror themeelement is usually designed to be visible entity.
Overall,the major European and American horror filmspursuit to sensory stimulation.
Asian movies
-Japanese and Korean movie
Japanese horror image is often an illusory no physicalWraith,the image of terror are mostly vague,the process at a time,slowlyshowing the Wraith.Japanese horror movies are always people lost in their ownset of situations,by the fantasy to let you fall in the darkness of space.

Answer 1

1.The horror movie is [the] movie which
2.to [give] the audience the creeps
3.is Frankenstein(电影名,书名,杂志名,电视剧名,一律“倾斜”,不用加粗,英语中不存在书名号,如果是手写的话请用双引号),which was produced in 1910 and only 16-minute long.
4.is the black-and-whitle silent film
5.不确定你是否想表达“古怪”这个意思,但peculiar这个词太大比较生僻,如果你想表达特殊的,可以用significant或者special
6.and it created...（逗号不能连接两个句子）
7.Referring to the region(depend on是依靠的意思,比如我依靠你生活),I divide the...
8.categories这个词是指两种类别,像恐怖电影和戏剧电影.这里用词不当.建议修改为：referring to the culture difference,I divide the horror movie into two different kinds of region.
或者based on the region,I divide the horror movie into two different types.
不好意思,我时间有限,只能帮你到这里喽~总的来讲,你的词汇量很丰富,但是很多词在具体的使用上有问题,建议你背单词的时候,不要背他的汉语解释,而是英文解释,记单词的方法应该是把他放到例句里来记.
像是view,scene,sight这三个词,虽然很简单,但是用起来还是有很大的分别的.