改错...我一个都木看出来==丢人了...OnerainydaywhenIwaswalkinghomewithoneofmyfriend,atruckcametostopbesideus.Thedriverputthewindowdownandofferedusaumbrellabecauseofhefoundwewerebothwetthrough.Istood

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改错...我一个都木看出来= =丢人了...
One rainy day when I was walking home with one of my friend,a truck came to stop beside us .The driver put the window down and offered us a umbrella because of he found we were both wet through.I stood there and could't believe that a complete stranger was so helpfully.The man insisted,so I accepted him and watch the truck disappear down the road.This man might need the umbrella herself,and he preferred to give it to someone.It was a lesson for us that it was possible give without expecting anything in return.
好象是八处...可是改不出来= =

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one of my friend 改成 friends
a umbrella 改成 an
because of 改成 because
so helpfully 改成 helpful
The man insisted,so I accepted him and watch the truck disappear down the road
accepted him 改成 accepted it watch 改成 watched
This man might need the umbrella herself,and he preferred to give it to someone.
这句中 herself 改成 himself preferred to do 是正确的 但是这句连词错了 and 改成 but
It was a lesson for us that it was possible give without expecting anything in return.
possible give 改成 possible to give anything 改成 something
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