以MyfirstDIYjob为题用英语写一篇短文，词数80个左右。内容必须包括以下要点，但不要逐条翻译，可以适当发挥。要点：1.赶在妈妈生日到来前做了一个生日音乐盒并对此加以保密以给妈

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以My first DIY job为题 用英语写一篇短文，词数80个左右。内容必须包括以下要点，但不要逐条翻译， 可以适当发挥。

要点：1.赶在妈妈生日到来前做了一个生日音乐盒 并对此加以保密以给妈妈一个惊喜；

2.   花了许多时间 在制作期间曾出错；

3.   将一朵真玫瑰粘贴在盒盖上；

4.   打开盒子后 妈妈就听到生日歌；

5.   第一次亲手为妈妈做礼物，妈妈高兴，你更高兴。

 

                                     My first DIY job

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  One possible version:

My first DIYjob Mum's birthday was coming so I decided to make her a birthday music box. I kept this secret because I wanted to give her a surprise. It took me three hours to make it. During the course of making it many things went wrong. I sticked a real rose to the cover of the box After Mum opened the box she heard the birthday song This was the first time for me to make a present for Mum with my own hands. Mum was very happy and I was even happier.