主题是mycampuslife还没有写完但时间赶紧想先让英语好的大大帮帮忙感激不尽.楼主大一了评委都是外教3分钟到5分钟的演讲现在肯定篇幅还不够.希望有地道英语表达尤其是标了汉语的那

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主题是my campus life 还没有写完但时间赶紧想先让英语好的大大帮帮忙 感激不尽.
楼主大一了 评委都是外教 3分钟到5分钟的演讲 现在肯定篇幅还不够.希望有地道英语表达 尤其是标了汉语的那两句 我翻译无力.
结尾处希望帮忙写点有亮点的句子
hello,every body,i'm glad to stand here and today i'd like to talk about my campus life as a freshman.
i still remember the first day i reported to south west university.i had a health check-up,paid my tuition fee ,hand on my registration and so on.not until i finished
all of them by myself did i realised i spent the whole of 2 hours.at that time i didn't recognise this place,and even lost my way.i think the school is large,feeling a
little happy for i lived in no.1 dormintory,which one is very close to teaching building.but it didn't last long.when i found it's about ten minutes'walk to public
baths i felt really annoyed.how could it spent more than half an hour—one-fourtieighth of every day on taking a bath?
apart from the accomodation condition,i can live pretty good.myy roomates are very nice ,sometime can be extrordinary humorous.the only thing we are really worried
about is eatting too much ,feeling hungry too much every day!once we decided to go on a diet and didn't eat dinner.unfortunately we became hungry after evening
class.we looked at each other,without saying a word,just giving a meaningful smile.then we ran to the snake street as fast as an arrow and have a big meal.
however,at that time,i came to realise that this is university.no body cares about you weight.no body cares about your study.no body cares about if you live a
meaningful life,except yourself.most chinese students in university have no goal,just play all the day,which is waste of life.i'm definitely sure i don't want to live
in that way.i know i have to work hard in every side to get progress,and everytime i get a little progress i think myself more shallow.每一次我得到一点进步我便越是不满
足.that's the pleasure for get knowlegy,however it's from taking courses,reading books,watching movies and so on.这就是获得知识的乐趣,无论是从课堂内得来,还是阅读书
籍、观赏电影等等课外活动得来.and it's all because that delightfully i have more time of my own to do what i love.
campus life gives me challenges.i'm not much of hand at performing in public for i have still been a little shy and always afraid of making mistakes.i never dance
before,buti participated in the chemical good voice as a dancer,even wearing heavy make-up.i never compere before but i become a compere at an activity.such kind of
things keep going on,which makes me feel enriched.
just like nick huzhe says:"leave what's behind and press forward,you can only win,if you don't give up."
i hope my campus life will become more colorful and meaningful.
thank you very much!

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hello,every body,i'm glad to be standing here and today,i'd like to talk about my campus life as a freshman.
i still remember the first day i reported to south west university.i had a health check-up,paid my tuition fee ,handED In my registration and so on.not until i finished
all of them by myself did i realised THAT I'VE spent A whole 2 hours.at that time i didn't recognise this place,and even lost my way.i think the school is large,feeling a
little happy THAT (for用在这里不合适) i lived in no.1 dormintory,which (没有‘one’） is very close to THE teaching building.but it didn't last long.when i found it's about A ten minute walk to THE public
bath i felt really annoyed.how could it spent more than half an hour—one-fourtieighth of every day taking a bath?!
apart from the accomodation conditionS,i can live pretty good.my roomates are very nice ,sometimeS THEY can be extrAordinarILY humorous.the only thing we are really worried
about is eating too much ,feeling hungry too much every day!once we'VE decided to go on a diet and didn't eat dinner.unfortunately we became hungry after THE evening
class.we looked at each other,without saying a word,just giving a meaningful smile.then we ran to the SNACK (说成蛇了.） street as fast as an arrow and haD a big meal.
however,at that time,i came to realise that this is A university.nobody cares about WHAT you weight.nobody cares about your studIES.no body cares about if you live a
meaningful life,except yourself.most chinese students in universitIES have no goalS ,THEY just play all the day,which is waste of life.i'm definitely sure i don't want to live
(没in) that way.(i know i have to work hard in every side to get progress)这个根本不知道你要说什么,and THE MORE PROGRESS I MAKE,THE MORE UNSATISFIED I AM WITH MYSELF
.that's the pleasure for get knowLEDGE.however it's from taking courses,reading books,watching movies and so on.THIS IS THE BEAUTY OF EDUCATION,WHETHER ITS OBTAINED FROM THE CLASSROOMS OR FROM READING,WATCHING MOVIES ETC.
(and it's all because that delightfully)什么?,i have more time of my own to do what i love.
campus life gives me challenges.i'm not much of hand (英文没有‘不拿手’.) at performing in public for i have still been a little shy and always afraid of making mistakes.i'VE never danceD
before,but i participated in the chemical good voice as a dancer ) ,even wearing heavy make-up.i never compere before but i become a compere at an activity(?).such kindS of
things keep going on,which makes me feel enriched.
just like nick huzhe says:"leave what's behind and press forward,you can only win,if you don't give up."
i hope my campus life will become more colorful and meaningful.
thank you very much!