假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词

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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Dear Tom

How time flies! It’s been half a year since I become a senior high school student. In this period I did quite good in my studies. Now I am one of the top student in my class. I wouldn’t have achieved so much with my teachers and classmates’ help. Mr .Wang who teach math is very patiently with us. With his help I have made a great progress. And most my classmates are friendly. They always give me a hand when needed. However I am grateful for their help. What is going on in my school? Tell me more in your next letter.

                                                             Yours

                                                             Li Hua

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Dear Tom

How time flies! It’s been half a year since I become a senior high school student. In this period I did quite good in my studies. Now I am one of the top student in my class. I wouldn’t have achieved so much with my teachers and classmates’ help. Mr .Wang who teach math is very patiently with us. With his help I have made a great progress. And most∧ my classmates are friendly. They always give me a hand when needed. However I am grateful for their help. What is going on in my school? Tell me more in your next letter.

                                                             Yours

                                                             Li Hua