假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．增加：在缺词处

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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下面画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：（1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
（2）只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
（辽宁省辽南协作区2016届二次联考） Victor was traveling through a train for his parents．All the time he is glancing with joy at his new shoes what his father had bought for him．After some time，he removed his shoes to take him a nap．After waking up，he found one of her shoes missing．He started crying unhappy．His parents tried to comfort him．His father told him it was no use cry and promised that after reaching home，he would buy him a new pair of shoes．Victor got very excited on hearing his father's words that he threw other shoe out of the train．
Reaching the destination，he suddenly found his losing shoe in a basket．How he regretted it!

Answer 1

Victor was traveling through a train for his parents．All the time he is glancing with joy at his new shoes what his father had bought for him．After some time，he removed his shoes to take him a nap．After waking up，he found one of her shoes missing．He started crying unhappy．His parents tried to comfort him．His father told him it was no use cry and promised that after reaching home，he would buy him a new pair of shoes．Victor got very excited on hearing his father's words that he threw∧other shoe out of the train．Reaching the destination，he suddenly found his losing shoe in a basket．How he regretted it!
详
1．for改为with；考查介词，travel with sb 意为"跟某人一起旅行"．
2．is改为was；考查动词的时态，本文讲述过去发生的事情，要用过去的某种时态．
3．what改为that/which；考查关系代词，分析句子成分可知这是一个定语从句，先行词his new shoes 指物，故用关系代词that/which．
4．去掉him；考查固定短语，take a nap是固定短语，意为"打盹，小睡片刻"．
5．her改为his；考查形容词性物主代词，分析句子可知此处的物主代词要与主语he保持一致，故用his．
6．unhappy改为unhappily；考查副词，此处用副词作状语修饰动词cry．
7．cry改为crying；考查非谓语动词，it is no use doing是固定用法，意为"做某事是没有用的"．
8．very改为so；考查副词，考查副词，这里用so与后面的that构成"so…that"结构，意为"如此…以至于"．
9．other前面加the；考查定冠词，此处用the other特指两者中的另一个．
10．losing改为lost；考查分成作定语，lost意为"丢失的"，在这里作定语．