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请你改正下面短文中的错误.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词

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请你改正下面短文中的错误.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
Once a king asked an artist to paint a picture by him.He told the artist he didn't want to any shadows in picture,just sunshine.When the king saw the finish picture,he was disappointed.Without shadows,everything in the picture looked flat or unreal.The point of the story was that we need both shadows and sunshine to have a completely picture,just as we need both rain and sun to have a living world.People,too,needs both sadness and happiness.
We often learn important lesson during sad times.So when we feel sad,we should try to think about that we might learn from the experience.
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Once a king asked an artist to paint a picture by him.He told the artist he didn't wantto
                                                                 for                                                   去掉to
any shadows in∧picture,just sunshine.When the king saw the finishpicture,he was
                     the                                                                   finished
disappointed.Without shadows,everything in the picture looked flat or  unreal.The point of the
                                                                                                       and
story was that we need both shadows and sunshine to have a completely picture,just as we
         is                                                                              complete
need both rain and sun to have a living world.People,too,needsboth sadness and happiness.
                                                                                          need
We often learn important lesson during sad times.So when we feel sad,we should try to think
                                     lessons
about thatwe might learn from the experience.
        what

1.将by改为for    考查介词的用法     本句的意思是:从前,有位国王让一位画家为他画画;by"通过,被";故用for"为,为了"
2.去掉to     考查动词的用法    want是及物动词,其后可直接跟名词作宾语,故去掉to
3.在picture前加the   考查冠词的用法    picture在此处是第二次出现,指为国王画的那幅画;故加the
4.将finish的改为finished    考查形容词的用法   此处用作定语修饰名词picture;表示被动,已完成的动作;意为:那副已完成的画;故用由过去分词转化来的形容词
5.将or改为and      考查连词的用法   根据句意(没有阴影,画面中的一切看起来既平整又不真实)可知,此处表示并列而不是选择关系,故用and
6.将was改为is     考查时态    此处讲述的是该故事给人们留下的启示,指的是它的现实意义,故用一般现在时
7.将 completely改为complete    考查形容词的用法      此处用来修饰名词 picture,故用形容词;意为:一副完整的图画
8.将needs改为need     考查主谓一致    由于本句的主语是People(集体名词:人们),故谓语动词使用原形
9.将lesson改为lessons       考查名词的单复数      根据句意"我们经常在悲伤的时候学到一些经验教训"可知,此处指的不只是一个经验教训;故用名词的复数形式lessons
10.将that改为what       考查连接代词的用法     此处用在动词短语 think about之后,用来引导宾语从句,并且在该从句中作宾语,意为:所学习到的东西;因为that在宾语从句中,没有任何意义,也不作句子成分,只起连接作用;故用what