唉,一篇英语作文,找出错误并纠正,Mum,ImetYangli,myprimaryschoolclassmate,theafernoon,youwon'tbelieveit!Shehaschangedalot.Shehasshortblackhairthreeyearsago.Nowshehaslongyellowhair.Ithinkitlookverybad.Sheuse

Question

唉,一篇英语作文,找出错误并纠正,
Mum,I met Yang li,my primary school classmate,the afernoon,you won't believe it!She has changed a lot .She has short black hair three years ago.Now she has long yellow hair.I think it look very bad.She used to be shy,Now she was outgoing and have many friends.I remember she used to likes play tennis with her mother ,Now she likes play computer games all the time .she didn't used to like math.Now it's her favorite subject,but she hate art.She thinks drawing picture is difficult.

Answer 1

Mum,I met Yang Li who is(是个从句,所以要连在一起） my primary school classmate this（具体到那一天中午） afternoon.you won`t believe it!She has changed a lot.She used to（过去常常.固定搭配） have short black hair three years ago.Now she has long golden（头发不能用yellow来形容） hair.I think it looks（三单） very bad.She used to be shy,now she was outgoing and has(三单)many friends.I remember she used to like playing(like doing sth.+used to do sth.) tennis with her mother.Now she likes playing(同上)computer games.(all the time不能这样用)She didn`t used to like math.Now it`s her favorite subject,but she hates(三单)art.She thinks drawing pictures（复数形式） is difficult.