英语作文文修改（剔除语法错误和中式英语）Tostun,twovisitorsarewashingtheirfeetinthepublicfountain,thoughtheywereinformed"NOWASHING".Theyjustifiedthemselvesthatitistheirrights.Whetherprivaterightsshould

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英语作文文修改（剔除语法错误和中式英语）
To stun, two visitors are washing their feet in the public fountain, though they were informed "NO WASHING". They justified themselves that it is their rights. Whether private rights should have a limit in public room?
When I was tens, my schooling education told me that we should behaviour ourselves in public occasions, and I scarcely saw people kissing outsider, going out with bare upper body, not to say such conduct shown above picture. The abuse of private rights calls for public culture, which I firmly believe is sill alive and well in some parts of the world, not a thing of the past. No public culture ruling private conduct is no guarantee of everyone ’s legal rights. Would you like live in a messy society suffusing quarrels and battles?
For me, the answer is no. How can we establish a sound public culture? I think two steps should be adopted.(后文省略）

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第一句话中的“ are”应该是“were”吧,They justified themselves that it is their rights.中“is”改为“was”,Whether private rights should have a limit in public room建议修改,When I was tens中“tens”不明白.my schooling education told me that we should behaviour ourselves in public occasions中式英语,建议改为i
learn...用更通俗,也更加通顺. and I scarcely saw people kissing outsider、which I firmly believe is sill alive中的outsider,sill?是不是有问题.which I firmly believe is sill alive and well in some parts of the world, 这句也比较繁琐,建议修改.最后就是No public culture ruling private conduct is no guarantee of everyone ’s legal rights,可以改为without public culture ruling private conduct,people"s ’s legal rights will not be guaranteed