请帮我判下我的英语作文I'mLiHua,thechiefoftheschoolartdeaprtment.OurschoolwillholdaArt'sDayactivity.Yhisactivityincludesing,paintandsomegame.Ihopeyouattendtheactivityandasajudge.Beacusyouareverygoodteacher

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请帮我判下我的英语作文
I'm Li Hua,the chief of the school art deaprtment.Our school will hold a Art's Day activity.Yhis activity include sing,paint and some game.I hope you attend the activity and as a judge.Beacus you are very good teacher and every students is like you Please give me your reply earl
我知道我很菜,所以请把错误指出来,我好改

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I'm Li Hua,the chief of the school art deapartment.Our school will hold an activity called the Art's Day .This activity include singing,painting and some games.I hope you can attend the activity and be a judge.Beacaus you are a good teacher and every student likes you.Please give me your reply soon.
这个是我改好的,主要改了 单词拼写错误,语法错误,漏冠词 等.你比较一下吧.