求帮忙修改作文(指出错误修改即可)假定你是李华.请你给笔友Peter写封信,告诉他你叔叔李明将去他所在城市开会,带去他想要的那幅中国画,同时询问他是否可以接机.信中还需说明：李明：高

Question

求帮忙修改作文(指出错误修改即可)
假定你是李华.请你给笔友Peter写封信,告诉他你叔叔李明将去他所在城市开会,带去他想要的那幅中国画,同时询问他是否可以接机.信中还需说明：
李明：高个子,戴眼镜 航班号：CA985
到达：8月6日上午11:30
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯.
习作
Dear Peter:
How are you doing?My uncle Li Ming will leave for your citiy to attend a meeting.He will bring the Chinese picuture that you want to have for you.The picutre is very beautiful and I think you must like it.I hope you can pick him up at the airport if you have free time.My uncle is very tall with a pair of glasses.The nember of the airport is CA985.He will arrive at your citiy at 11:30 ,Augest 6.Thank you very much.Please write to me if you have some questions.I will tell you at first time.
Yours
Li hua

Answer 1

不才献丑了~修改都用[sample]写了一下..都是文法上的..
Dear Peter:
How are you doing?My uncle Li Ming [will attend a meeting at your city on August].He will [also]bring the Chinese [painting you want for you].The [painting] is very beautiful and I think you [will love] it.I hope you can pick him up at the airport if you [are available].My uncle is very tall [and wears] a pair of glasses.The [flight number] is CA985.He will arrive at [your city airport around]11:30 ,[August] 6.Thank you very much.
[Please write me a reply if you have any question.I will respond as soon as possible]
Yours
Li Hua