帮我一句话谢谢,亲爱的朋友：货物已经发送,我得知你从别的卖家购买许多货物,他们有的货物我全部有库存.我希望你能从我这里购买.当然,价格方面我会比他们优惠.而且赠品也会比他们丰厚

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帮我一句话谢谢,
亲爱的朋友：货物已经发送,我得知你从别的卖家购买许多货物,他们有的货物我全部有库存.我希望你能从我这里购买.当然,价格方面我会比他们优惠.而且赠品也会比他们丰厚.

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楼上的,商务英语不能这么写啊
Dear friend,
The goods you ordered have been delivered.As I know,you have purchased many products from other retailers.All the products you need are in stock.I hope to recieve your further orders.Our prices are very competitive.And the presents enclosed what you buy are rich.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
yours,
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