英语翻译总是在和朋友打电话的时候提起你,或许仅仅一句话,总是傻傻告诉你一些我的事情,总是想象你的样子因为我忘记了,总是想起你的声音因为我还记得一些微微的,总是在期待什么.好吧,

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英语翻译
总是在和朋友打电话的时候提起你,或许仅仅一句话,总是傻傻告诉你一些我的事情,总是想象你的样子因为我忘记了,总是想起你的声音因为我还记得一些微微的,总是在期待什么.好吧,忘掉所有,做自然的自己.我够笨我知道.不,不是忘掉,是死心.
i always mention about u when i talking to my friend.probably just one word.i always stupidity tell u somrthing about me that maybe just some bagatelle.i always imagine ur face because i already forgot.i always bethink ur voice coz i still remember a little bit softness.i always looking forward to something .do u konw what i meaning?all right,forget about all this.be myself.i know i am stupid enough.no,no just 4get.i must give up the idea forevery.我的翻译,来改错吧

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首先,把自己的语言先按标准汉语组织好吧.
i always mention about u when i am talking with my friends. probably just a little words. i always ridiculously tell u sth insignificant about myself. and i always think about ur face because i already forgot it. i always in rememberance of ur voice coz it sounded a little bit softly. i always look forward to something .do u konw what i mean? all right. forget it. just be myself. no, not just forget. i must give up the idea forevery. i know i am so babyish.
“我还记得一些微微的”是什么意思?
“好吧,忘掉所有,做自然的自己.”的主语是谁?
“不,不是忘掉,是死心.”的主语又是谁?
你应该把你的中文先组织好,叫人看不懂怎么翻译呢?
语序也有问题,给你调整了一下.